2009年10月4日 星期日

In the sunday

I have been studying English for the past week.
but I was content.
I will leave for Jhongli city this afternoon.
and then go home tonight .My family members with I made a barbecue .

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  1. Unknown2009年10月4日 清晨6:19

    but I was content.
    --->but的b大寫就可以了 因為你上一句有句點

    I will leave for Jhongli city this afternoon.
    --->可以用go to取代leave for 因為go to比較簡單好懂 要用leave for也可以

    and then go home tonight .My family members with I made a barbecue .
    --->一樣開頭的A大寫 兩句可以直接合併 And then, I go home because have a barbecue with my family tonight.

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  2. Unknown2009年10月4日 清晨6:21

    最後一句的family已經代表整個家庭或家族的成員了 所以不用再有members

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